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Sample #1: Excerpted from the Player's
Guide to Eberron, which is © by Wizards of the Coast. It is
included here for review purposes only.

Ancient Ruin
The blasted land of the Demon Wastes is the last bastion of the evil
powers that ruled Khorvaire during the Age of Demons, and the most
dangerous place on the continent. Nevertheless, adventurers journey
here for the ruins scattered across the desolate landscape, some so old
that only their foundations remain. Though the barren land contains
hidden artifacts and forgotten magic, few adventurers return with these
treasures, for the dangers of the Wastes are legion. Fiends still hold
sway here — rakshasas and lesser beings whose reach is long and subtle.
Night hags control small patches of land and remnants of civilization.
Humanoid tribes serve the whims of their demonic masters.
When the dragons and their couatl allies defeated the fiends at the end
of the Age of Demons, they imprisoned the godlike leaders of the
rakshasas deep beneath the surface of the world. The fiendish followers
of those rakshasa rajahs fled to the land that had been their empire’s
capital — Fah’lrrg in the Infernal language, called the Demon Wastes on
modern maps. Many of the rajahs lie beneath the Wastes, while some
remain trapped elsewhere in Khorvaire and the continents beyond. Here
more than anywhere, however, they left their stamp on the surface
world. Their presence (as well as the heavy concentration of their
followers) taints the land and the living things upon it. The ground is
cracked and dry, the life leached away. Beyond the twisted network of
canyons called the Labyrinth, the Demon Wastes present a blasted plain
of blackened sand and volcanic glass.
The imprisoned fiends are openly worshiped here. The Carrion Tribes, a
handful of barbarian human clans descended from a wave of Sarlonan
refugees trapped in this land more than fifteen centuries ago, pay
homage to the rakshasa lords trapped beneath the Demon Wastes. Led by
half-fiends and possessed warriors, each of these clans gives its
allegiance to a different rajah, and the nature of that patron
influences everything from customs and traditions to iconography and
the clan’s magical abilities. The Plaguebearers clan reveres a
fiend-lord of filth and pestilence, while the Deathbringers worship a
lord of death and the undead. The Enshrouded worship a fiend of
darkness, and the Carrion Hounds revere rot and eat carrion like the
vultures they hold sacred. Perhaps most unusually, the Moon Reavers
clan worships the night hags of the Wastes rather than the entombed
lords of the rakshasas.
The Carrion Tribes are diverse in their beliefs and practices, but they
maintain a common reverence for the barbarian ideal and the state of
rage. They believe that a raging barbarian is briefly possessed by a
fiendish spirit that empowers his body and hardens his mind. For this
reason, barbarians hold almost all positions of authority in the
Carrion Tribes, although the Moon Reavers also exalt the art of the
rogue — stealthy guerrilla tactics, assassination, and shadowy terror.
Though most barbarians in the Demon Wastes serve the fiends eagerly, a
few escape, are abandoned, or rebel. These individuals might fall in
with the Ghaash’kala (the ghost-guardians who prevent the evil in the
Wastes from spreading), or they might join one of the few communities
that manage to survive in the Wastes. Some become adventurers, and if
they are sakah (see page 35), they use their gifts to further their own
ends.
The Lords of Dust (see page 147) are perhaps the most important power
group in the Demon Wastes. Devoted servants of the imprisoned fiends,
the Lords are distinguished from the Carrion Tribes by being fiends
themselves. While some among the Lords of Dust seek to channel the
imprisoned rajahs’ power to enhance their own, most strive to break the
bonds of the fiend-lords and usher in a new Age of Demons.
The Sakah
Strange births are common within the barbarian tribes; newborns may
exhibit the sign of one of the rajahs. Such a sign might be subtle, but
could include horns, sharp teeth or claws, red eyes, rough gray skin,
bulging knuckles, bony spikes, leathery wings, or some other sign of
the rajahs’ dark influence. Some individuals display these fiendish
features at birth, while others develop them as they mature physically,
emotionally, and spiritually. The Carrion Tribes believe that these
individuals are blessed and call them sakah (“touched ones”). They
often rise to become influential members of their tribes.
Sakah may also have subtle powers that manifest as they age, such as a
captivating gaze, a talent for sorcery, or a preternaturally charming
voice. These abilities and the reputation of all sakah let them rise in
rank within the Carrion Tribes, grant them the strength to survive on
their own, or allow them to flee the Wastes.
Writing Sample #2: Excerpted from Warcraft:
Shadows & Light, which is © by White Wolf Publishing and
Blizzard Entertainment. It is included here for review purposes only.
Maiev Shadowsong
When the demons first came to
Azeroth 10,000 years ago and blasted Kalimdor apart, Maiev Shadowsong
was a young Kaldorei and could do little but observe the destruction.
She witnessed red-skinned monsters stomping across the ground,
slaughtering her family and friends. Fire rained from the heavens, and
Azshara, the sorcerer-queen, continued to summon ever more
monstrosities into the world.
Maiev was horrified. When she miraculously survived the War of the
Ancients and traveled to Mount Hyjal, she was certain that arcane magic
was a horrid, filthy power that had brought doom to the world. The
second Well of Eternity's creation shocked Maiev, and she was glad when
Malfurion imprisoned Illidan beneath the earth. In fact, she approached
the druid and demanded that she be allowed to watch over him, ensuring
that he never escaped to wreak his evil. The young elf's zeal and
skills impressed Malfurion, and he appointed her Illidan's eternal
warden.
Though her primary charge was Illidan Stormrage, Maiev, as senior
warden, also served as bounty hunter and assassin of enemies and
escaped criminals. Maiev served well for 10,000 years, training
constantly. However, when the Third War came to Kalimdor, she could not
prevent Tyrande Whisperwind from releasing Illidan. Shamed and angered,
Maiev emerged from the deep caverns and resolved to track down the
Betrayer and end his treachery once and for all. When she discovered
that Illidan had consumed the Skull of Gul'dan and turned
against the night elves, she became even more enraged. This creature
had slid from her grasp, and she would make him pay.
Sinking into vengeful madness, Maiev pursued Illidan all the way to
Outland. Emotion clouded her vision, and Illidan slipped away from her
several times. Finally, when Maiev was all but blinded by frustration
and vengeance, the Betrayer got the better of her. Maiev died alone on
the red sand, unmourned, unsung, with none to remember her fall, her
soul empty of all but rage.
Grom Hellscream
Chieftain of the Warsong clan and an orc legend, Grom is a blademaster
of the old traditions and was one of the first to succumb to the
Burning Legion's curse. For many years he struggled with the bloodlust
and rage seething within him, embracing and despising it in turns. He
led his race to countless victories in the Second War and escaped from
Draenor before Ner'zhul's Dark Portals ripped it asunder. Grom and his
Warsong clan were the only orcs to evade capture and internment after
the Second War, and Grom led the Warsongs in an underground, guerilla
war against the humans. Despite his best efforts, Grom was unable to
rouse the captured orcs from their stupor.
A decade after the Second War's end, the young orc Thrall sought out
Grom Hellscream. Grom inspired Thrall to free the orcs and served as a
mentor and ally to the young shaman. Together they liberated the orcs,
both from the humans' camps and the demons' taint, and became close
friends. They led the new Horde across the sea to Kalimdor, at the
urging of a strange prophet and Thrall's spiritual instincts.
Grom continued to serve Thrall faithfully on Kalimdor, leading the
Warsong clan to Ashenvale Forest to establish an orc camp. During his
logging exploits, Grom came into conflict with the night elves, and he
has the odd distinction of being the first outsider to contact the
Kaldorei since their seclusion. While the Warsongs and night elves
battled, the pit lord Mannoroth spilled his cursed blood into a well in
Ashenvale. Grom's old bloodlust drove him to seek out the horrid water,
and he drank deeply. Overcome by rage and brimming with demonic power,
Grom and his cursed orcs smashed the night elven force and slew the
demigod Cenarius. When Thrall came to Ashenvale and witnessed the
horrible being Grom had become, he attacked his former friend and
returned him to his senses. Grom was ashamed, but he accompanied Thrall
to seek out Mannoroth and exact revenge -- both for Grom's corruption
and for the poisoning of the orc race ages ago. The two overcame the
pit lord, but Grom fell in battle. The orcs revere him as one of their
greatest heroes.
Writing
Sample #3: Excepted from the
Dungeons & Dragons adventure
“Bloodlines,” which appears in issue
#94 of Dungeon magazine and
which is © by Wizards of the Coast. It is included here for review
purposes only.
Entering the room beyond the
ensorcelled doors is like stepping into a wall of cloying ink.
Blackness seems to blind the mind as well as the eyes, and a shiver of
fear dances along the spine. Goosebumps prickle along arms and hair
rises from the backs of necks. Inside the small room, all is darkness,
though one thing is clearly visible: a huge glyph in the center of the
floor, pulsing with an eerie red light. The light doesn’t so much
illuminate the darkness as lend a crimson hue to the blackness.
An irregular form is slumped
against the far wall. Your own light seems to have been snuffed out by
invisible tendrils; the only illumination comes from the strobing,
blood-red rune on the floor. This flashing light etches a figure in the
darkness. Humanoid, skeletal, a long, cartilaginous tongue whips from
its mouth and weaves back and forth in the open air, dripping something
vile. Tiny horns adorn its skull. The creature emits a low groan before
raising a blade of utter darkness in a once-human hand.
Other
Writing Samples
A number of my works are available for free online.
- An article
about translting the WoW computer game into the WoW RPG paper game.
- Several excerpts from Monte Cook's World of Darkness, some of
which were in collaboration with Monte Cook: The
World You Knew, The
Iconnu, The
Intrusion's Influence, Creatures
of the Night, Shadow
Cultures, A
Journal Entry, Vampire
Disciplines, The
Haunted Lands, The
Conflagration, and The
Nightmare Wave.
- Three excerpts
from the Player's Guide to Eberron: Ancient
Ruin (also featured above), Gold
Fuels Old Feuds, and Devastation
Everywhere.
- Bones of
Ironforge, an introductory adventure for the World of Warcraft RPG.
- A 12-page preview
of Rumble in the Wizard's Tower,
the first Wicked Fantasy Factory adventure.
- "What is the
Warcraft RPG?", a web article.
- The World
of Warcraft RPG conversion document, updating some of the old books.
Development Samples
My work as a
developer is often analogous to that of editor-in-chief. A number of
works that I developed are available for free online. More development
samples are available upon request.
- Several excerpts from Monte Cook's World of Darkness: Character
Details, Character
Focus, Sample
Discipline, Another
Sample Discipline, Sample
Character Type: Awakened, and Awakened
Core Abilities.
- An excerpt from World of Darkness: Urban Legends in White
Wolf's Summer
2007 Quarterly magazine (p. 4).
- Just a Delivery,
an introductory adventure for the Etherscope RPG.
- Previews for the Etherscope RPG.
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